Please read this week's Promoting Other Artists (Kernan fan art!).
Theme Song:
Yes, my comic has a song. I listened to it every time I worked on a page for the past two years. If The Locked Maze were a movie, this song would be playing during the closing credits:
New Order, Temptation (YouTube version)
I know, I know, technically it should be an Oingo Boingo song (and trust me, there was A LOT of Oingo Boingo listening as well), but I never found an Oingo Boingo song that was specifically tied to my comic. Although Try to Believe is pretty close. :)
Final Explanation:
The Significant Other has said that none of you will ever speak to me again after this ending. Sorry. I know it seems pretty rotten (but I mean, when has this comic been happy? really?), but I had my reasons.
I have said before that I ended TLM with a Greek theme: the Marriage to Death (a sometimes metaphorical/sometimes literal theme in Greek stories). It recurs throughout literature in small and large ways, from Antigone to Romeo and Juliet, even in the popular Vampire novels of the last 100+ years. The simplest explanation is that it is a literal take on the idea that marriage IS death - if nothing else than the death of the maiden state - and to some extent I am sure the old world believed that, seeing as Roman girls were sent down the aisle in a big blood-red veil. Some people prefer the interpretation that women have a special connection/attraction to death, and in many cultures it was the women who were left responsible for the preparations of bodies for burial. But this wasn't really what captured my imagination. I was taken instead by the ideas in Johnston's The Restless Dead (a book which heavily influenced TLM). She discussed how all monsters are liminal in the Greek myths - half one thing, half another. For young maidens, killed at the cusp of womanhood before they could complete their role in marrying and having children, they became terrifying demons, perpetuating their grief by taking down other young maidens too soon, or targetting babies or husbands in an attempt to complete the part of their lives that was missed. But some of them also became powerful goddesses, like Persephone, who had the power to reverse death, to show mercy and reward love in an afterlife that was otherwise hostile and absolute. And I like that. I like the idea that some people acquire great power by experiencing something truly awful, and coming through it: broken, grieving, liminally stranded between the naive world of the optimists and the cold world of the dead. And in that between-state, they can accomplish things no one else can do. Holly's story is about that. She was broken, and she took it and used it as her power to defeat someone no one else could touch. She will never belong, anywhere she goes, but her outcast existence will also take her places no one else has been and teach her things no one else knows.
And if you want to imagine all the things that happen from this point on (since I will never write that story), just ask yourself these questions:
- Why has Kernan never found his dead mother, seeing as he can come and go freely in the afterlife?
- Who and where is Kernan's father?
- What will happen to Anna, Lucky, and the others now that the Queen and Morgan are gone?
- Will Holly ever learn to see things the way Morgan does?
- What is on the other side of the Maze?



I am so extremely sad to see it end like this but it's refreshing to read something that doesn't have a fairy tale 'happy ending'.
This is a good ending, Holly has found some peace.
(not to mention her much loved kitty cat which just makes my heart swell.)
Your artwork is beautiful and I love watching artists grow with there work, I hope you have another project in mind. ;-)
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Yeah, if nothing else, this has been a great diary of my art development, ha. ^^ I hope to have something else going soon.
Also, will Kernan and Holly ever meet again? I hope they will <3
OF COURSE! No matter what happens, of course she comes back *eventually*. :)
Yeah, Em. What next?
Thank you so much for all your hard work. Glued to every page here in England - and now I get to read through them all again. Keep us posted!
Now, I am going to practice figure drawing until I feel like less of a hack. And write like crazy so I have a good script to work from once I feel like drawing again. :)
Really looking forward to seeing this new project, i've loved to read TLM, and i hope to enjoy your work for a long time to come:D
you are no hack! your style is amazing, it has that slightly fairy tale out of and in proportion-ness that makes everyone look perfect, your character writing and development is amazing, I really cannot wait to read more of your work
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Well, well. This actually seems like a pretty happy ending to me; now Holly gets an adventure of her own choosing! It's also pretty fantastic that you've given us so much mythological food for thought with Kernan. I have a few ideas, sure, but it sounds like we'll never know for certain in that catch-the-truth-in-your-hands sort of way. Speaking of which, do you think you'll put this out in print?
I am working on getting it listed at IndyPlanet. And none of my ideas are terribly concrete, so it seems a shame to state them. My writing process involves assembling bits that I know are 100% exactly what happened with a bunch that is 10% exact and the slowly retooling everything until it all works together and makes sense. This means that many of the tentative ideas I have would be abandoned or at least changed if I wrote the story entirely. So saying everything right now... seems like something I would regret or want to change later. Even saying I am 100% sure I'll never write that story... may not be 100% true. (:
Au contraire, Significant Other - while I did not want this story to end yet, this is a happy ending, at least to me. The others go to their Summerlands or past the Veil, or whatever it is they believe - Holly gets to see what's really truly there.
And then, once she knows, she'll find her way back to Kernan.
That's happy, to me. :) It's an adventure, a good one, one that Holly's chosen for herself, and she has someone to come back to once she's tired of it. I couldn't ask for a better ending for her.
:) Thanks. I tried to make it as positive a take on Holly's choice as I could. I just believe that although she has changed a lot, she still has a long way to go before she can settle down anywhere and be happy again.
I dunno; it's a little tough on Kernan though.
He has to wait for her to come back, or die himself to go find out what heppened to her, or never know her fate. It seems more like the traditional 'prince-rides-off-into-the-sunset' fairy-tale ending reversed - the Princess gets to leave her fairy castle and see the world, while the Prince is stuck waiting in one spot, forever, faithfully, with no life of his own.
Is that really a better fate just because the genders are reversed?
I don't think he's waiting for her to come back. He has a life and a job of his own. He's waiting for her to figure out her own life/job so she can be happy with him, rather than solely dependent on love for her happily-ever-after.
major squeeeee!!!! ive been going and rereading these last pages over and over again!!!
i LOVE the ending! with holly and kernan, a typical 'happy' ending would have felt.....wrong, disneyfied....this fits so well, and now im free to imagine what happens next! (tho i admit to hoping that the story will oneday be written....)
:)
Amazing. Your artwork is beautiful and I love the storyline. Well done! I'm looking forward to your next project! :)
Thank you. :)
Wow! What an ending. No, I don't dislike it. Sure, it would have been nice and easy to have one of those "and she lived happily ever after" things, to put the lid on it, so to speak, but I feel that would not have done the story justice. The more I think about it, the more I like it. Of course I want there to be a happy ending, because I care for the characters. But I like the story to end this way. So go you!
I'd like to thank you for this beautiful comic, I've enjoyed each and every page from the moment I found it. Your artwork is beautiful and your story is great. I really, really look forward to more projects from you, and once again: thank you so much for sharing your talents.
Thank you. It has been amazing meeting online all the people who've read it. I've been very accepting of my life as an outsider, but it is definitely outlook-altering to know that there are so many out there who "get" this. :)
A wonderfully fitting ending. I'm sad to see it, and also glad to see the story come to a full conclusion (the potential for continuance being there but not smashed-in-your-face). Loved your art style, and hope to see something else pop up from you in the future. Bravo. :D
Thank you! :)
Aw is it over but I just started reading this weekend sad face:(
That just means you didn't have to wait FOREVER for me to get to the next page every week (I am so slow...). :)
It's a lovely ending. I'm so glad that she will have Nesbit with her while she finds out what's on the other side. And Kernan looks content to wait with his dogs. Thank you for giving us a thought-provoking story with beautiful artwork. I hope you'll consider doing another story sometime.
Well, Kernan has to be a little curious about what she'll find too. When she comes back, he'll get a good story as well as his sweetheart back. :)
I think the ending worked really well. And it wasn't an unhappy ending. In this fantasy world, everyone knows about the afterlife as a fact. And it seemed to me that the cat came for her, not Kernan.
Yeah. At least right now, she belongs with her kitty. ^^
Will you be letting us keep up with you on tumblr or facebook, to see the art you'll be working on?
I'm not a big fan of facebook, so I don't know how much I'll be posting there. But I like tumblr, especially for sharing WIP pieces and sketches and stuff. mleiv.com and deviantart will continue to be where most of my stuff goes, though.
I have GOT to know, who or what was Kernan's farther?
You might want to read Tea with the Black Dragon by R.A. MacAvoy, and Dragonsbane by Barbara Hambly.
I really enjoyed reading this comic. There is so much to look at on every page, and you created a protagonist that will stay with me long after the story ends. This is a fantastic piece of work. Thank you for putting it online!
Thank you for your feedback and taking the time to read it. :)
And I stumble apon it just as it ends. Good for my not liking to wait side, but it would have been nice to watch it develop ov a longer period :3
Fantastic though, it's such a beautiful story. I think I had a little bit of a tear at the end there :3
As long as it was a little bit... quickly concealed... *sniff*
:) Thank you!
This was beautiful, Mleiv. The writing was refreshing and believable, I adore (read: am totally jealous of) your art style, and you accomplished a solid ending on your own terms. I've been lurking on your pages for a long time, but I had to come out of the internet to congratulate you for finishing this piece... and thank you for it. I'm sure that a lot of who you are went into this story, and I wanted to tell you how much I, personally, appreciate you sharing it...
I can't wait to see what you do next.
Thank you! I hope I do not disappoint. :)
Came upon this at the very end. This was a wonderful story and I like the art a lot, especially the every so often Mucha touches around the Queen ^_^ I look forward to seeing more from you and I would be happy to put the bound version of this on my bookshelf.
The Queen was SOOO much fun to draw. I must fill my future drawings with complicated costumes and hairdos. ^^
I too discovered this comic just a few pages ago, and now it's over. Some of the most beautiful and compelling art I've seen on the web. Great story and characters. Thanks for it all. I think I need a hard copy of this.
Thank you! I will see what I can do about print (read: I hate dealing with printers). :)
WOW! Just found and read the whole thing, and it's masterfully done; congrats. Loved the art and storytelling, which combined to give exactly the feel and air that it seems you were going for.
Can't wait to see anything else you can put together. :)
Aw, thank you! ^^
So... that's it? no more story? :-( Honestly though, I do like the ending. It leaves room for the imagination to work its magic.
Yeah, my favorite part of reading a good book is taking it and writing something else into it at the end. I just left... ermmm... a LOT of room for that here, ha.
Just to let you know i enjoyed the comic... It would feel wrong not to post here :)
Aw, thank you! :)
I've immensely enjoyed this work! I find it incredibly imaginative in terms of both story and art, and the depth of it could be discussed for quite some length...
AS for how it ends... Well, I can certainly understand why Holly would choose as she does, even though it seems to me very poignant that she doesn't want to give life just one more try with Ker. I mean, he is definitely unlike the people she'd known before, and in his way just as much of an outcast- it might've really worked for them, especially that things are bound to change in the Wood now. But anyway, I can understand her decision - what truly saddens me is that HE doesn't go with her. IS it that he is not tired of life yet? But then, what is good in his life exactly? Does he belong anywhere? Will anyone besides her ever love him, ever have it in themselves to look beyond his demon half? And is he not inured ot death already what with the work he does (and his dogs)?
In either case, this is a very 'grown-up' ending, I'd say.
Kernan has a job and his dogs to look after and a life of his own. Following her just to be with her would be just as bad as Holly staying with him in a place she didn't belong.
This is just the beginning, right? I mean it's not that I just discovered this wonderful comic but that it is only now when Holly has finally entered the Labyrinth and the fun of discovery begins. Riiiiight? *stares at author a bit maniacally*
It is the beginning of another story. Unfortunately, not a story I will be writing (too busy). But yes, I imagine all sorts of adventures after this for Holly. :)
It's over?! D: I was so into the story I was even thinking of what would happen next. This is an amazing comic I hate to see it end :(
Thank you! I hope to fill my future weeks with other stories. ^^
I can't believe I didn't even discover this until it was over! I wish there had been some earlier ads on TWC. Even before I read your "about" tab, I was thinking that some of your faces looked like gelflings from Dark Crystal, and then I saw the reference to Froud. I see the influence, but I REALLY like the cleaner, almost art-deco, sensibility in your style. Thank you so much, and I will keep my eyes open for further work from you.
Thanks. And TWC takes *forever* to post ads - there is a several month waiting list. :/ So, yeah, next time I will put an ad in at the BEGINNING of my comic, not the end, ha.
I just found your comic (through the ad - I'm just a sucker for art nouveau designs, I HAD to click). I finished it in one sitting (instead of work), and would like to say how much I'm impressed with the art, the storytelling and the originality of the ideas and your approach (I mean, "girl meets fairies appearing in the modern day city" could have led you to so many clichés...)
A wonderful story, parts of which I will have to chew on...
I'll try to keep an eye on your following project.
Thank you once again!
Thank you. I hope my next project will not be too cliche. It may be. It will be more mainstream-enjoyable. I think. I dunno why people really grok Maze, frankly - I really just wrote it for myself - so I am thinking I don't have a clue about what is and isn't appealing. :P
Aaaawwww, i just found this comic, read through it all, and ya know what?
I LOVED the ending :))
Yay! :)
Terrific,Tippy-Top Notch (work and story) ! !
Talk about alternative endings......
Your art resides at the truely genius level: what strange and enduring beauty.
A long way from the rough pencils & B/W? Same great stuff with more polish.
Anything you do will be great! -Thank you.
Thank you!
I was a little disappointed with the ending at first, and then when I read your explanation for it and listened to the soundtrack it felt much more complete! =)
Great story! Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve!
And the song - the song makes the ending better! ^^
Thank you!
Bravo bravo bravo
Fantastic comic, the best I have read on the web, and so much better for not having some cheesy hollywood ending.
I have been wonderfully entertained by it all. Hope you do more soon.
M
It's a beautiful ending, and a true one. I prefer that to a happy one.
I know what you mean about 'acquiring great power by suffering something truly awful.' I didn't acquire great power, but I ended up with perspective, which is kind of the same thing. And I ended up half way between here and there, surround by a lot of people who don't understand. People who really can't understand... well, you take it as it comes, right?
I found this story yesterday, and the art is amazing, the characters are wonderful. It's good, so, I'm grateful you put it out into the world. Thank you.
Yes, sadly, the more I think about the ending the more I think how accurate it is. Nobody who is odd and outcast ever gets the Cinderella ending. They always stay odd and outcast. They may find people who understand, to a small degree, but that's not the same as finding a place to fit in. :/
What a great way to end boomk three. Loved this issue!
I just read your comic from the beginning and I must say that this is one of the most beautiful comics I've ever read. Reminds me of Neil Gaiman. You're a natural talent! Thank you four this experience.
Thank you! Neil Gaiman and I were both heavily influenced by the same writer: Diana Wynne Jones. Although Neverwhere still rings of Douglas Adams to me (another one of my favorite authors). :)
That was beautiful, both the story and the written epilogue here.
I like the idea that some people acquire great power by experiencing something truly awful, and coming through it: broken, grieving, liminally stranded between the naive world of the optimists and the cold world of the dead. And in that between-state, they can accomplish things no one else can do. Holly's story is about that. She was broken, and she took it and used it as her power to defeat someone no one else could touch. She will never belong, anywhere she goes, but her outcast existence will also take her places no one else has been and teach her things no one else knows.
That was very significant to me. Thank you.
Okay, now I just HAVE to ask. According to the idea that dead souls find "what they want to see" after the maze - Paradise, Summerland, etc - and be there happily ever after with the loved ones who came to find them, what if their loved ones shared a different vision of the afterlife? Would they be truly together, or would each one live in their own afterlife with the illusion of their loved ones?
It does create a whole weird circular paradox headache, as you would expect from a multi-dimensional, time-twisting labyrinth. Obviously not everyone gets what they want, as the Queen proves. A fair bit of divergence would be allowed between individuals occupying the same space (they would just experience a slightly different environment). But when the divergence is too great, either the individuals can't be together or they can only "visit."
IMO, the maze does not exist to be heaven or to make people happy; it is just a place to house people while they adjust from one existence to another, but along the way, most people simply got stuck there and never moved on.
Stayed up waaaaay too late last night reading this, but I have to say - it was completely worth it. The ending was deeply satisfying to me, on many levels. And the art was absolutely gorgeous to look at. I'm in love with it. Despite the story being over (at least, online. It'll go on in my head), I'm going to bookmark this so I can come back and read it all over again.
I agree with whoever mentioned it reminding them of Neil Gaiman, and I see the Diana Wynne Jones you mentioned, too. Particularly her "Fire and Hemlock." We should all go tweet this to @neilhimself (I am not a twitter person, but as I understand it, it might be the best way to bring it to his attention). I think it would be something he'd really enjoy reading. He has a whole menagerie of amazing artists and writers he collaborates with. Who knows? If he likes this (and I really think he would. It's very well-paced, beautifully drawn and written, and has a very wonderfully fitting end) maybe it could lead to something...? A fangirl may hope.
So anyway, thank you. I very much enjoyed reading this. :D
Aw, thank you! That is one of the nicest things anyone has said to me (especially the bit about staying up late to finish ^^).
As for Gaiman, yes, he is an amazing patron of the arts. He has taken his insane fame online and spent it towards very good causes. And we artists dream of things like that happening: being noticed. But from prior experience, I think all that would happen would be a brief thrill and temporary ego boost and then a painful return to anonymity, sans the dream with which to comfort oneself. I am too cynical: I prefer holding onto the hope of the fantasy to experiencing the disappointment of the reality. :/
I burned through the entire comic yesterday. It. Was. Amazing. From beginning to end, a beautiful work of art with an amazing plot.
I think the ending was perfect for this comic. Well done! Now, I can't wait to see what you produce next. =D
Thank you! ^^ I am working hard on the Next Project. Sketches posted to tumblr when I have 'em!
Wow, what a cool story! Hope to see more from you! (I am also stalking you on DeviantArt as well)
Thank you! And yay dA - what's your handle there?
Wow, only now found and read the whole thing. VERY much loved the art style and story telling. Holly is a particularly attractive character design/story for me. And you're local!! Are you available for commissions? Mostly just character sketches, both yours and interpretations of mine?
Thank you! :) I am usually too busy for commissions.
It sucks it had to end now, I can't sleep yet, nonetheless a great story, I'm definitely gonna be telling friends about it.
Aw, thanks! :)
This is one of the more sad, beautiful comics that I've had the chance to read. The art is breath taking, and the classic tragedy of the protagonist gives amazing emotional impact when coupled with that last touch of hope. There are so many questions left open, both for us and for the characters. Such is life, and some things will never be answered.
While I myself find Mormonism to be one of the darker faces of what is considered modern religions, I did like that you showed the humanity that exists even behind the thoughtless blind peer-enforced life that is the LDS. In the end we see that while some will cast you aside because of what the neighbours will think, there is always someone there who finds that faith expresses the goodness inside them already.
All in all, your art style and story-telling are astounding. I'd love to see more of Kernan, and I look forward to figuring out if you're actually the artist behind any of the other comics I read.
...and on a side note, I put "New Order" on when I started writing this, and I've just noticed that there is a little WOW advertisement on the "links" page featuring a little goblin who is dancing in time with the music.
Thank you for taking so much time to really consider my messages and say such nice things. ^^ I am not attached to any other comics, alas. I did a bit of fanart for Rainbow In The Dark, but that's it so far. Kinda new to the comics world yet. :)
Thank you for the story. :) I very much enjoyed reading it.
Wow. I was recommended this comic by a friend, and i was so caught up in it I had to finish it today. Thank you for brightening my world.
(: Aw, glad to hear it!
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think what is on the other side of the labyrinth, at least the illusion, anyway, is what you wanted or expected to see. If you expected heaven, it will be, and if you expected hell... However, there are some, like holly, that can see past the illusion to 'what's really there', there might be something... More. The truth, whether it be horrible or beautiful, lies on the other side of the labyrinth for her, and from this truth she will gain power beyond what anyone has ever dreamed of.
Also, your art is fantastic! My art pales in comparison.
I think of it more that the Labyrinth is a trap for people with expectations, holding them in their idea of what their afterlife should be. To get through the Labyrinth, you have to let go of those things (and people, unfortunately), so very few ever make it.
And thank you! :)
So since this is the last page, you've already gotten lots of "ZOMG, THIS COMIC IS AWESOME I LOVE YOU WAHWAHWAHWAH."
That being said, since you've already gotten loads of people to tell you how amazing you are, how your characters and their troubles connect with them on a personal level, how your artwork makes their eyes water from staring directly at too much awesome, I'm just going to say, "Yup. I agree."
I am sending this link to all of my buddies who know how to navigate the internet and webcomics (sadly I do have a few people in my life who are NOT tech-savy), and you will be getting a lots more comments from them.
You are a rare breed of person. One who is talented, humble about their gifts, someone who cares, understands, and has seen the hardships of life and are made a better, more passionate person rather than spiraling into cynicism. I thank you for the gift you have given to myself and the many others who have commented and read this work.
That's certainly the kind of person I *try* to be. I don't know how successful, or consistent, I am. I think cynicism is one of the most toxic and paralyzing states an artist can fall into. Better to be a fool who creates something than a critic who tears it down.
This is such an amazing story! Oh my goodness! I tore through it in one sitting, and now I want more! Except that it's perfectly contained, an absolute masterpiece of storytelling and the most imaginative portrayal of the afterlife yet, and yet completely grounded in Roman, Greek, and fey mythology. I love how you took all these scattered bits of myth and wove them into a coherent, dynamic world.
Will you be writing more stories in the next year or so to answer the questions you posted above? Or something completely different? Either way, you have me completely hooked, thank you so much for the wonderful story and the breath-taking artwork! I can't wait to see what you do next!
I thoroughly enjoyed this comic. The art is gorgeous, and I like the "world mechanics". Thank you for putting time and effort to create something as awesome as this!
Discovered the comic just a few hours ago and it was quite a wonderful piece to read through.
I feel honored to have read it.